Poetry?

Two poems I wrote a while back. These really speak to me tonight. No laughing if they are bad.

Alone on the moon
The sky is littered with stars
Each twinkling at its mate
Shining
Shining
Alone on the moon
The comet seen only once in a lifetime
Does it pass?
Fading
Fading
Perhaps its been missed
Perhaps it will never come
Veered from its course
Into another galaxy
Hurling
Hurling
Alone on the moon

Sometimes
Sometimes its hard to let go of the life you almost had
To the joys you had dreamed
To the dinners you'd planned
The heart moves, but slowly
It seems to enjoy those looks back
Move on the mind says
Yet it has secret longings of its own

A song, a place, a moment
Drift in and out
You keep walking, moving
Doing your best to leave it all behind
Find a new dream
Have a new hope
But is that possible
When the life you almost had was exactly what you wanted?

Move on says your mind
Forget says your heart
Don't look back says your soul